We had the class watch out work, which was very helpful as they gave us some very positive feedback and some ways to improve what we have done. The improvement we got were: that the some of the scene where the stalker is chasing the girl are a bit too long (so we will go over them and cut them down), this will also help as the brief says that the film should be about 5 minutes and we are over that time by quite a few minutes.
Another thing they say that needed to be improved on was that the stalker filming the girl when they are sitting on the beach ins't very obvious. We plan to improve this by filming in the stalkers prospective, this will work as then people can see that the stalker is clearly obsessed with this girl.
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