we have made a detailed list of everything that we want to happen in our short film.

scene 1:
- dolly shot through window of writer opening laptop and starting to write
- inside the house writing 'the pitter patter of rain'
- close up up of the screen to see writing,
- shot of the window to see the rain start.
- another shot of writer, narrator says there "a dog barks at a tree"
- cut to shot of dog barking at a tree in a park
scene 2:
- zooms out to a woman walking by the park
- (lots of different shot of the women walking)
- see a person in the background following her
- stalker walking (over shoulder shot)
- cuts back to the writer (point of view shot)
- we see the woman spot the stalker (looking in a car mirror)
- women starts to run -beginning to chase
- (lots of shot of chase)
scene 3:
- writer doesn't know what to write
- types something (and death grips the poor innocent girl) audience unable to see what she types
- cut to killer lunging
- back to writer going to bed
scene 4:
- next day
- getting breakfast
- goes to grab newspaper
- sees the front page
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